Thursday, February 03, 2005

called
to see
if your back
was still alligned
and your sheets
were growing grass along the corners of your bed
but you've
got too much to wear on your sleeves
it has too much to do with me
and secretly
i want to bury in the yard
the grey remains
of a friendship scarred


-from kissing the lipless by the shins
personally, i would think it makes more sense (not to mention, sounds better) if it were "the grave remains".
just me?

//meh --

2 comments:

claud said...

i like "the grey remains" actually

Anonymous said...

to simplify ('cause it's so dang difficult when i'm not around) it's like this:

guy wants to bury (berry!) remains of the friendship. the remains are grey, the friendship is scarred. grave remains, not so possible, 'cause they be inanimate. not to mention scarred. and grey.

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